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Monday, September 7, 2009 at 4:18pm | Edit Note | Delete
Ok guys I tend to be a little shy about sharing my writing but here you go. Please tell me if you hate it and why, or if you love it idk. I could use constructive criticism. Plz and Thnx lol >.<

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Ignorance threatens to take away my identity
As if to unpaint a painted picture with prejudice
Yet hurtful words only make them stronger
Each brandished slur is an inch added to my wide open eyes
Each sling of razor sharp profanities add color to my skin
While cocked back fully loaded tongues, ready to fire
Words reaching out to pull red lips to arch down
They only rise higher
Because I take those blank faces and color them different
I color them dangerous
Dangerous to side slated shifting conservative eyes
Dangerous, they will rip away the voice that demands
“This is what defines you”
I pull it right out of the vocal cords
Dangerous, we will stand up and demand
“Well who the hell are you to...”
With life packaged tight in black and white labeled boxes
Who the hell are you to force that upon me?
When I am neither black and white nor white and black
When I contain the whole spectrum that shielded eyes refuse to see
If you don’t see the whole me then please just don’t see me
Because I am a new breed
Struggling for a place all my own yet happily so, all alone
Away from hands that wipe away change from stranger’s eyes


~Love Marissa Alvarado

Cute

If I couldn't help that I smile more than frown
and laugh after every word that came out
would you pick a tough girl instead of me,
who likes to pout
If I couldn't help that my voice gets slightly higher
when I call your name
This is simply something I couldn't tame
would you pick a girl with sharp claws and wild mane
would my flimsy arm decrease your love for me?
If I couldn't help that my smile is large
but my teeth are dull
would you hand me sandpaper and ask me to sharpen them
or would you look at my eyes and pick them for what they were
If I couldn't help that my eyes smile with my mouth
would you pick them instead of someone else
If I couldn't help that I am unlike any other
would you take me instead of another

New frowns or lack of

This place, this apartment this city these walls
they're finally my own but
with new town brings new frowns and
new sounds or lack of
when you miss your old road not like the ones here that
threaten you
the buses that run you off the road
New rounds with new friends or the lack of
Nothing but strangers with
pretty faces walk by
painted up with smiles but behind
are the same frowns for new towns
the same walls that
we both are both too shy to penetrate
New food or the lack of
when you are as attached to your hometowns food as I am
hardly anything can supplement but
that place looks interesting and
new memories or lack of
when your stuck missin all those late nigh missions
Its time to get out of the past and
move on to find
there are things to do and see and
new people to meet
in this new town that brings new frowns but
also brings new sounds, new crowds, new rounds, new foods, new friends new memories and
new smiles.




Love it hate it?

~peace

Hate

Okay I'm so goofing around with this one, I went to rhymezone.com for this cause I don't rhyme... So love it hate it tell me ~ peace



I've never been one to
rhyme very well like say, you
but here now is my attempt, -u
please tell me if you like it
if not i might just have to spike it
um,

Hate
ate
masturbate
litigate
take the bait
go in the crate
follow your fate
Don't go forward but go straight
Don't gain weight
or we might have to to ship you in a crate
Don't like it then debate
Don't mind cause I got my armor plate
ad my salad plate as a sheild?

Moving Out Moving On Living life

Sooo...

College is coming up quick and summers is almost over, I am slowly getting ready and haven't even began to say goodbye. I have gotten quite comfortable with my life here and love the people that are in my life. I am not sure when I got that hit of reality, or if I even quite actually. Perhaps it was when my groups Jefa pointed to me and asked, this is going to be your last ceremony, right?

Well recently I had started buying things here and there that I think you add to my apartment, like this.... heart, its all pretty and carved.



(I got bored)



I am really anxious about college, I have all those what ifs running through my head and I am going to be sad to leaving all of my friends that I have grown so accustomed to. I am really going to miss them, but I super do hope that two of them do transfer to my school like they have been thinking about =D



well i had better enjoy the time i have left, and my birthday coming up!!!
Party!!

Love,
missa

nevada, Utah, Arizona, new Mexico :)

so I went on a weeklong trip through the southwest with family. while in zion, Utah I had for the first time in a long time been in my writing mindset. it felt good but I had no pencil and paper, again. blah but oh well. it had been so long since I been in that mood, that I forgot how great it feels. I totally miss it. like writing always puts me in the best, I don't want to saymoods but idno letting out my creativity. yaknow?

well also for the first time In a long time I dreamed. hella. from the moment I closed my eyes it seemed. but only in Zion and the grand canyon did I dream like that. that was real nice. and the stars hella beautiful. beats the hell outta calis stars. but oh man I surely do enjoy sacs great water.

I finished choke and am like more then 3/4 the way done with the palace of illusions.

I so can't wait to go back to Aztec dancing practice Monday :)
and I had a really nice night hanging out with vince last night

las vegas... yeh. im not 21. but it's quite interesting... otherwise...

ohoh beatles love ( cirque du soliel) was fantastic!! nough said hehe

hiking in Zion was prolly the funnest we had to go through this river but it got late and we had to race the light and watch out for flash floods, oh man that was scary but totally fun.

arizona Hopi reservation was interesting, right when we got there my uncle took us to new Mexico just hella random but yeah. then there was this kid that was like this is what u acheive with work ( to james) and shit. like suggesting we were lazy or something like weird comments all evening haha I'm like okay kid.

:)

:P

Yeeeah I got a Job. ^_^

Gonna have money in the bank :]
and the manager was talking it being transferable where I'm going to college. When she said that I was like, That just made my day
But really that saves a whole load off my back if I do get to.

I found a car that I kinda like and is relatively good for what it is so... we shall see....